Power Point Presentation

So, Mondays class was a little interesting. My group had the topic of editing and revision, whats the difference? Well, we had to revise our whole powerpoint for todays class. We made changes to the structure, the grammar, and added numerous slides of examples of both editing and revision. Everyone in our group  has participated very well and added a lot of info for our powerpoint presentation. I hope we dont mess up on Wednesday!!